染雾改正错误英语日记 篇一
Today I woke up early and had a breakfast. Then I went to the school by bus. In the school, I studied math, English and science. After school, I went home and did my homework. Then I played computer games with my friends. In the evening, I watched TV and had dinner. Finally, I went to bed.
Correction:
Today, I woke up early and had breakfast. Then, I took the bus to school. At school, I studied math, English, and science. After school, I went home and completed my homework. Later, I played computer games with my friends. In the evening, I watched TV while having dinner. Finally, I went to bed.
改正错误英语日记 篇二
Today, I went to the shopping mall with my friends. We bought many clothes and shoes. After shopping, we went to a restaurant and ate lunch. The food was delicious. Then, we went to the cinema and watched a movie. It was very interesting. After the movie, we went back home. In the evening, I played video games and had dinner. Finally, I went to bed.
Correction:
Today, I went to the shopping mall with my friends. We bought many clothes and shoes. After shopping, we went to a restaurant and had lunch. The food was delicious. Then, we went to the cinema and watched a movie. It was very interesting. After the movie, we went back home. In the evening, I played video games and had dinner. Finally, I went to bed.
改正错误英语日记 篇三
改正错误英语日记
今天，妈妈叫我写作业，我不想写，就找各种理由。妈妈就狠狠地批评了我，之后我才愁眉苦脸、极不情愿地去写作业。
Today, my mother asked me to do my homework. If I didn't want to do it, I would find various reasons. My mother criticized me severely, and then I went to do my homework very reluctantly.
写完作业，我认真地想了想，我的`这种做法很不对。我以后要改掉这个坏习惯，做一个爱写作业的好孩子!
When I finished my homework, I thought about it seriously. I didn't do it right. I will get rid of this bad habit and become a good boy who loves to do homework!
